FEED BACK 3

TUTOR :

1,Put drawings and development process in the rationale . Analysis the stats , put the user instruction in the back of package , do more research about brands .Do more research about labellings.  

2,  Reference need footnote in the bottom page of rational, show all the development in the rational ,
put marketing knowledge in the rationale,High light the features in the rationale.The package is too big and it takes too much room in the laundry , change the shape of the package.The square entrances can change to be circle .

PEER 1:

The packaging is too board and not creative , although , it is so hard to shipping .